Friday 11 September 2020

my Narrative story

 

 

We have been writing about a spooky house. We were learning to use describing words and speech marks.
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3 comments:

  1. Kahukura Hill11 September 2020 at 19:27

    Wow what an awesome story :) well done Mahaki and Liam :)

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  2. Anonymous21 September 2020 at 10:57

    HI M ahaki,
    I like how you added the devil in.
    Did you think about putting the unicorn in ?
    Have you ever been in a haunted house?

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  3. Unaise22 October 2020 at 11:39

    Kia ora Mahaki
    My name is Unaise and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I like how you add a unicorn into your narrative story.
    Did you think about putting that unicorn into your story.
    Maybe you could add writing into what you have been writing.
    Did you think about what to put in your writing.
    Mā te wā
    Unaise

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